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Literature Text
I can see in your eyes that your soul is out of fight
but not mine baby, not mine.
My love songs aren't about you and maybe you've had someone new every night
but it doesn't hurt me.
Hearts like ping pong balls and paint-stained walls and city lights and street fights
Your eyes look like the end of the world
I can't see past them anymore
See past your eyes into your core
Where love is burning but it's dying too
You say love isn't dying because it's killing you
Nothing is left in your eyes
Your eyes are the end of the world
but not mine baby, not mine.
My love songs aren't about you and maybe you've had someone new every night
but it doesn't hurt me.
Hearts like ping pong balls and paint-stained walls and city lights and street fights
Your eyes look like the end of the world
I can't see past them anymore
See past your eyes into your core
Where love is burning but it's dying too
You say love isn't dying because it's killing you
Nothing is left in your eyes
Your eyes are the end of the world
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I like it a lot, although the repetition of the person's eyes being the end of the world seems to me to be a little ineffective. I would think the last line be a lot more powerful if it was something never said before.